郑州市 2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（8）附参考范文
郑州市 2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（8）附参考范文
.（浙江卷）短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely tree then, so I'll to say” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.
am
in Friday evening.
on
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys
than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted.
I put into my pocket when he
wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with
the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late
on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave
It back. She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
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(2024武汉供题三)
请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。
Should a city try to preserve its old，historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings？Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
注意：①无须写标题，除诗歌外，文体不限；
②文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；
③词数为120左右。
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参考范文
One possible version：
Some people believe that a city should destroy its old，historic buildings and replace them with modern ones.Others，me included，have an opposite opinion that a city should try to preserve its old，historic buildings.The reasons are as follows.
First of all，historic buildings are symbols of cities.Without these historic buildings，a lot of cities would lose their cultural image or even their identity.Besides，historic buildings benefit the tourism industry.Moreover，historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education.For instance，the Forbidden City is one of the most visited historic buildings in China.Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture，but they also gain rich knowledge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties.
In conclusion，preserving these buildings is definitely necessary.
短文改错
Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
In my opinion, the government should develop public transport. It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable. Besides, we should use public transport as much as possibly. It’s better to share cars during rush hours. In a word, we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.
参考答案：
Traffic jam is ∧ very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours. It can cause lots of trouble. First, people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations. It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam. Second, wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents. Also, traffic jam cause serious air pollution. But it is necessary to deal with this problem.
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(2024·师大附中月考)请你简要概述图中所述资讯事件，并针对路人的反应发表自己的看法，如果你是在场的路人之一，你会怎么做？
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One possible version：
Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of twoyearold girl Xiao Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passersby as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue's body without so much as a glance.
In my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.
Any one of us might become the ‘passerby’ at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.
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. 你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法，请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three． They both work hard but they have different learning methods． _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________ _______________________________
参考范文
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have different learning methods.
Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his home- work. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.
However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it posible for her to go to bed early.
In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.
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高考英语书面表达指导
书面表达写作指导
书面表达是综合性强、难度大的题目。但是,当我们深入研究后就不难发现,书面表达实质上就是组词成句、联句成篇的一项系统工程。只要我们抓好词、句、段这三个环节,加强缩写、改写、仿写等练习,由简到繁、由易到难,一环扣一环地进行训练,由模仿到活用,由操练到交际,就能使语言知识逐步转化成语言交际能力。
(一)选词
词是语言的最小组成单位,不同词性的词组合在一起构成句子。因此,要充分利用课文中出现的重点单词、词组、句型,培养学生学习和识记单词的能力。
1.注意一词多义的应用。如time一词,在Times have changed中指“时代”;在six times the size of mine中指“倍数”;在in slow time中指“拍子”。切忌在写文章下笔时,一词滥用,似是而非。
2.结合英语构词法,同义反义比较,名词的可数与不可数词义的区别,加强对英语词形变化的理解,扩充词汇量。
3.巧用过渡词,增强文章逻辑性。为了使所写短文通顺,连贯得体,句子与句子之间过渡自然,提高所写短文的质量,适当加上一些表示时间顺序、递进、因果、条件、让步等关系的过渡词是很有必要的。常见的过渡词有:
(1)表时间顺序的过渡词:first,second,third,and then,finally,before,after a few days,at last,at that time,later,in the past,immediately,in the meanwhile等等。
(2)表空间顺序的过渡词:near(to),far(from),in the front of,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,to the right,to the left,on one side,on the other side of,outside等等。
(3)表并列的过渡词:also,and,then,too,as well(as)等等。
(4)表转折的过渡词:but,yet,however,in spite of,otherwise等等。
(5)表递进的过渡词:what’ s more,besides,what’ s worse,in addition,furthermore,moreover,again等等。
(6)表目的的过渡词:for this reason,for this purpose,so that;in order that,so as to,in order to等等。
(7)表因果的过渡词:because,since,so,as a result,therefore,thus,as等等。
(8)表解释说明的过渡词:for example,in fact,in this case,for,actually等等。
(9)表条件的过渡词:as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless等等。
(10)表让步的过渡词:though,as,even if／though,who(what,when,where)ever等等。
(11)表总结的过渡词:in brief,as has been stated,in a word等等。
(12)过渡性插入语:I think,I’ m afraid,you know,as we all know等等。
(二)造句
句子是表达一个较完整意思的最小单位,所以遣词造句的能力在英语写作中是非常重要的,是书面表达成败的关键。因此,加强造句训练就显得尤其重要。
1.连词成句:这是最基本的一种训练形式。 如:
(1)father,for you,new,will buy,says,a bike可连成Father says,“I will buy a new bike for you.”
(2)me,all right,write and tell,this will be,please,whether可连成Please write and tell me whether this will be all right.
2.充分利用教材中特有的句型、句式、语法造句。
(1)句型、句式可使句子表达简洁、准确,提高文章档次。
It’ s+adj.+for sb.to do sth.“对某人来讲,做某事是……”。如:
It’ s difficult for a child to do the job without help.
It’ s no good／use...doing sth.做某事没好处／用处
It’ s no use giving him any more money.
It is(has been)+时间+since...自从……好长时间了
It is(has been) 5 years since he joined the army.
It’ s not long before...不久……
It will not be long before be comes back.
It is／was...who/that...强调句型
It was yesterday that we visited the factory.
It seems that...好像……
It seems that she is happy./She seems happy.
I don’t think／believe／expect(that)...我认为……不
I don’t think I know you.
Will you please...?请……好吗?
Will you please help me?
Would you like sth.／to do sth.?做……好吗?Would you like to have a cup of tea?
(2)用主从复合句、分词作状语、with复合结构等用法,可使语言描绘更加生动,增强文章的情感性和感召力。如:
What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.(NMET 2002书面表达参考答案片段)
I don’ t know about others,but I used to work even at weekends,doing endless homework and at tending Classes as well.(NMET 2001书面表达参考答案片段)
It’ s a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.(NMET 2003书面表达参考答案片段)
How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.(NMET 1998书面表达参考答案片段)
(3)用句型替换练习增强语言的灵活性,拓宽表达空间。如:
这孩子太小,还不到上学的年龄。
The boy is too young to go to school.
The boy is so young that he can’t go to school.
The boy is not old enough to go to school.
我花了5元钱买这本书。
I spent five yuan on the book.
I spent five yuan(in)buying the book.
I paid five yuan for the book.
I bought the book for five yuan.
The book cost me five yuan.
例句赏析
下面是一些常用的精美句子,请注意它们在表达方面的特点。
1.You go down the street,turn to the right,and then you’ ll see the post office on your right.
