揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文

　　揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文

　　短文改错----（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now

　　76._______

　　back home. Thank you very much for showing them around

　　77. ______

　　your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After

　　78._______

　　we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,

　　79._______

　　where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond

　　80._______

　　of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying

　　81．________

　　another couple of day. However, my father had to return to

　　82.________

　　work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It

　　83．________

　　was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to

　　84._______

　　our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.

　　85._______

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　76.after---since

　　77.them---us

　　78.for---with

　　79.正确

　　80.去掉much

　　81.staying---stay

　　82.day----days

　　83.fly---flew

　　84.trip前a

　　85.better----more

　　***************************************************************结束

　　表格提示类

　　4. 你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。

　　一些同学认为不应该取消另一些同学认为应该取消 听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视

　　听是获取信息的重要途径之一

　　国际合作日益增多，听说能力应加强 考试中各地收听效果好坏不一、不公平

　　英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大

　　今后并非人人都要与外国人口头交流

　　注意：1．文章的起始句已给出。 2．词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。

　　3．参考词汇：取消—cancel

　　国际合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.

　　Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.

　　But others don’t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.

　　***************************************************************结束

　　短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　(2024·唐山三模）

　　Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.

　　In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.

　　揭阳市2024高考英语短文改错、书面表达一轮训练（15）附参考范文

　　短文改错----（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now

　　76._______

　　back home. Thank you very much for showing them around

　　77. ______

　　your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After

　　78._______

　　we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,

　　79._______

　　where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond

　　80._______

　　of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying

　　81．________

　　another couple of day. However, my father had to return to

　　82.________

　　work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It

　　83．________

　　was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to

　　84._______

　　our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.

　　85._______

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　76.after---since

　　77.them---us

　　78.for---with

　　79.正确

　　80.去掉much

　　81.staying---stay

　　82.day----days

　　83.fly---flew

　　84.trip前a

　　85.better----more

　　***************************************************************结束

　　表格提示类

　　4. 你校同学进行了一场有关高考英语听力测试的讨论。讨论的主题是：高考英语测试中的听力部分该不该取消？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。

　　一些同学认为不应该取消另一些同学认为应该取消 听是语言的四项基本技能之一，不能忽视

　　听是获取信息的重要途径之一

　　国际合作日益增多，听说能力应加强 考试中各地收听效果好坏不一、不公平

　　英语教师和语音设备城乡差异过大

　　今后并非人人都要与外国人口头交流

　　注意：1．文章的起始句已给出。 2．词数：100左右（不包括已给的起始句）。

　　3．参考词汇：取消—cancel

　　国际合作—international cooperation The students of our school had a discussion about whether listening test in the National Matriculation English Test should be kept or canceled.

　　Some students think that listening test should not be canceled. They insist listening is among the four basic skills. We therefore can not ignore it. Besides, listening is one of the important channels for us to get information from the outside world. So it should be strengthened today when international cooperation is becoming more and more frequent.

　　But others don’t agree. They think not everyone has to communicate with foreigners in the future. Moreover, listening test is unfair to the students in the areas where radio signals cannot be picked up effectively. And for certain reasons, there is a big difference in teachers and equipment between the countryside and the city.

　　***************************************************************结束

　　短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　(2024·唐山三模）

　　Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.

　　In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.