2024届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第9讲 高级词汇和短语在写作中的应用

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　　英语 第9讲

　　高级词汇和短语在写作中的应用 ——好词妙用，与众不同 一、魔法导航 写作中所谓的 “高级词汇”指的是《课程标准》中有但课本中出现的频率 不高而实际上经常用到,或《课程标准》中没有列入或没有识记要求,但在实 际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇(包括短语)。要让语言表达多样化,就要做到 “人无我有,人有我优”。如果考生能恰当地运用此类词汇,在写作中定会给 评卷老师留下深刻的印象,提高书面表达的得分。下面把写作中常用的高级 词汇做一下简要总结,希望对同学们的写作有所裨益。  动词类 1.attend (参加)→be involved in;participate in 2.cause(导致)→lead to;result in;contribute to;give rise to 3.consider(考虑)→take...into consideration/account 4.fail(失败)→meet with failure 5.help (帮助)→do...a/the favor;lend...a helping hand

　　6.master(掌握)→have a good command of 7.realize(意识到)→be aware

　　8.remember(记得)→bear/keep in mind

　　9.save(节省)→set aside 10.send(送)→deliver 11.thank(感谢)→appreciate

　　12.tend to do sth.(倾向于做某事)→have a tendency to do sth. 13.use(使用)→make use of 14.understand(理解)→make sense of

　　15.be made up of(由……组成)→be composed of/consist of 16.be being built(在建造中)→be under construction 17.can't do sth.(不能做某事)→have trouble/difficulty doing sth. 18.decide to do sth.(决定做某事)→determine to do sth.;be determined to do sth. 19.have to do sth.(不得不做某事)→cannot help but do sth.;have no alternative but to do sth. 20.lie in(位于)→be located/situated in 21.think of sth. (想到某事)→sth.occurs to sb. 22.try one's best to do sth.(尽力做某事)→spare no effort to do sth./do everything in one's power to do sth.  典句引领 I thought of a good idea suddenly. →All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.

　　我突然想到一个好主意。 We should remember that we should love nature.

　　→We should keep in mind that we should love nature.

　　 雕词琢句 (1)很多因素导致了交通问题。(2024江苏)   

　　    答案　 Quite a few factors give rise to/lead to/result in the traffic problem. (2)我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。(2024浙江)  

　　  答案　 I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into account.

　　(3)除了采取措施向污染宣战,我们别无选择。   

　　    答案　 We have no alternative but to take measures to fight against pollution.  名词类 1.chance(机会)→opportunity

　　2.choice(选择)→alternative

　　3.people(人们)→individuals 4.result(结果)→consequence 5.shortcoming(缺点)→drawback 6.more and more people(越来越多的人)→an increasing number of people  典句引领 You should seize the chance to overcome the shortcoming. →You should seize the opportunity to overcome the drawback.

　　你应该抓住这个机会克服这个缺点。  雕词琢句 不同的人对食品安全的问题有着不同的看法。    

　　   答案　 Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.

　　 形容词类 1.difficult(困难的)→challenging 2.enough (足够的)→adequate

　　3.good(好的)→outstanding;distinguished;brilliant 4.important(重要的)→essential;vital;significant 5.proper(恰当的)→appropriate

　　6.rich(丰富的)→abundant

　　7.tired(疲惫的)→exhausted;worn out 8.be angry with(对……生气)→be annoyed with 9.be busy with(忙于……)→be occupied with 10.be very happy(很高兴)→be wild with joy 11.be+adj. (important/useful/beneficial/helpful/valuable) →be of+n. (importance/use/benefit/help/value) 12.be satisfied with(对……感到满意)→express one's satisfaction with

　　13.be interested in(对……感兴趣)→show interest in;be fascinated by;be crazy about;...appeal to sb.

　　 典句引领 Hearing the exciting news, all of us were very happy. →Hearing the exciting news, all of us were wild with joy. 听到这个令人兴奋的消息,我们都欣喜若狂。  雕词琢句 (1)In the coming three years, 　    (我们的学校生活将非常具有挑战 性). (2024江西)  答案　 our school life will be challenging (2)事实上,遵守交通规则很重要。(2024江苏)   

　　    答案　As a matter of fact, obeying the traffic rules is vital/significant.

　　 副词类 1.finally(最后)→eventually 2.hardly(几乎不)→barely

　　3.however(然而)→nevertheless 4.hurriedly(匆忙地)→in a hurry 5.immediately(立刻)→without hesitation/delay;in a flash 6.nowadays(现在)→currently

　　7.so(因此)→consequently;therefore;thus 8.suddenly(突然)→all of a sudden 9.very(非常)→extremely  典句引领 Finally, we worked out the difficult problem which was very tough for them. →Eventually, we worked out the difficult problem which was extremely tough for them. 最终,我们解决了对他们来讲极其困难的问题。  雕词琢句 (1)　    (毫不犹豫), I decided to follow them and did have lots of fun that day. (2024浙江)  答案　 Without hesitation

　　(2)昨天雨下得很大。因此,我们取消了会议。   

　　    答案　 It rained heavily yesterday. Therefore, we called off the meeting.

　　 介词(短语)类 1.considering(考虑到)→in view of

　　2.during(在……期间)→in the course of

　　3.in fact(事实上)→as a matter of fact 4.in a word(总之)→to summarize;in conclusion; to sum up

　　 典句引领 Considering his age and conditions, he has done it very well. →In view of his age and conditions, he has done it very well. 考虑到他的年龄和条件,他做得已经相当不错了。  雕词琢句 (1)事实上,每个人都有自己的优点和缺点。   

　　    答案　 As a matter of fact, everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses.

　　(2)总之,为了提高普通话水平,你最好多加练习。(2024四川)   

　　    答案　 In conclusion, in order to improve your Mandarin, you had better prac tice more.

　　二、学以致用 1.单句美容

　　写出与画线部分意思相近的词或短语。 (1)Bored with the long lecture,I turned to an interesting novel.  

　　    (2)His composition was so good that all of us wanted to read it.  

　　    (3)In fact,that English song didn't attract the audience.    

　　(4)I believe that the advice he has offered to you will be helpful to your English study.    

　　(5)In my opinion,you should take part in some social activities to open your eyes.    

　　(6)In a word,if you use your spare time better,you will improve your spoken Eng- lish soon.    

　　 答案 (1)Fed up with;amusing/appealing (2)outstanding/excellent;were inclined to/tended to (3)Actually/As a matter of fact;appeal to/capture the attention of

　　(4)am convinced/hold a firm belief;beneficial/of help (5)From my point of view/As far as I'm concerned;participate in;broaden your horizons

　　(6)To summarize/In conclusion/To sum up;provided;make full use of/make the most of;promote

　　2.话题写作 [本期话题]　文化节日 [写作要求]　至少使用三处高级词汇。 根据下面的信息提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 1.中秋节是中国的传统节日之一,非常受欢迎; 2.无论工作多忙,人们都尽量回家庆祝; 3.家人在一块儿赏月、吃月饼,玩得很高兴; 4.人们还有旅游、拜访亲友等其他活动。    

　　 答案 One possible version: Being one of the traditional Chinese festivals in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually,no matter how busy people are with their work,they still do everything in their power to go home for the celebration. When enjoying the full moon as well as eating moon cakes to- gether, people are wild with joy. In addition, they have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting relatives or friends.In conclusion, the Mid-Autumn Festival is of great importance for Chinese people.

　　三、美文赏读 请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。 As Madame Curie put it,“I never see what has been done;I only see what re- mains to be done.” 注意: 1.无须写标题; 2.除诗歌外,文体不限; 3.内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例; 4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 5.词数100左

　　 答案 One possible version: ①In the course of my years of school life,what strikes me most is that I've learned I should look at what I need to do in future,rather than be lost in what I've done before. When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago with good grades,I ②was wild with joy,thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation. ③Therefore,I found myself hanging around with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies.It didn't take long before I realized that I fell behind sharply in my studies,sometimes even with my homework unfinished.Fully④ aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed,I began to catch up. We ⑤have a tendency to be content with what we've achieved,forgetting all about our road ahead,which may actually put us at a disadvantage.Only when we ⑥keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress. 本文①—⑥充分、灵活地使用了高级词汇或短语,提升了语言表达层次,展示 了作者高超的语言运用能力,值得大家揣摩和学习。 【写作点评】

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　　英语 第9讲

　　高级词汇和短语在写作中的应用 ——好词妙用，与众不同 一、魔法导航 写作中所谓的 “高级词汇”指的是《课程标准》中有但课本中出现的频率 不高而实际上经常用到,或《课程标准》中没有列入或没有识记要求,但在实 际运用中却出现比较频繁的词汇(包括短语)。要让语言表达多样化,就要做到 “人无我有,人有我优”。如果考生能恰当地运用此类词汇,在写作中定会给 评卷老师留下深刻的印象,提高书面表达的得分。下面把写作中常用的高级 词汇做一下简要总结,希望对同学们的写作有所裨益。  动词类 1.attend (参加)→be involved in;participate in 2.cause(导致)→lead to;result in;contribute to;give rise to 3.consider(考虑)→take...into consideration/account 4.fail(失败)→meet with failure 5.help (帮助)→do...a/the favor;lend...a helping hand

　　6.master(掌握)→have a good command of 7.realize(意识到)→be aware

　　8.remember(记得)→bear/keep in mind

　　9.save(节省)→set aside 10.send(送)→deliver 11.thank(感谢)→appreciate

　　12.tend to do sth.(倾向于做某事)→have a tendency to do sth. 13.use(使用)→make use of 14.understand(理解)→make sense of

　　15.be made up of(由……组成)→be composed of/consist of 16.be being built(在建造中)→be under construction 17.can't do sth.(不能做某事)→have trouble/difficulty doing sth. 18.decide to do sth.(决定做某事)→determine to do sth.;be determined to do sth. 19.have to do sth.(不得不做某事)→cannot help but do sth.;have no alternative but to do sth. 20.lie in(位于)→be located/situated in 21.think of sth. (想到某事)→sth.occurs to sb. 22.try one's best to do sth.(尽力做某事)→spare no effort to do sth./do everything in one's power to do sth.  典句引领 I thought of a good idea suddenly. →All of a sudden, a good idea occurred to me.

　　我突然想到一个好主意。 We should remember that we should love nature.

　　→We should keep in mind that we should love nature.

　　 雕词琢句 (1)很多因素导致了交通问题。(2024江苏)   

　　    答案　 Quite a few factors give rise to/lead to/result in the traffic problem. (2)我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。(2024浙江)  

　　  答案　 I sincerely hope you can take my suggestions into account.

　　(3)除了采取措施向污染宣战,我们别无选择。   

　　    答案　 We have no alternative but to take measures to fight against pollution.  名词类 1.chance(机会)→opportunity

　　2.choice(选择)→alternative

　　3.people(人们)→individuals 4.result(结果)→consequence 5.shortcoming(缺点)→drawback 6.more and more people(越来越多的人)→an increasing number of people  典句引领 You should seize the chance to overcome the shortcoming. →You should seize the opportunity to overcome the drawback.

　　你应该抓住这个机会克服这个缺点。  雕词琢句 不同的人对食品安全的问题有着不同的看法。    

　　   答案　 Different individuals have different opinions about the safety of food.

　　 形容词类 1.difficult(困难的)→challenging 2.enough (足够的)→adequate

　　3.good(好的)→outstanding;distinguished;brilliant 4.important(重要的)→essential;vital;significant 5.proper(恰当的)→appropriate

　　6.rich(丰富的)→abundant

　　7.tired(疲惫的)→exhausted;worn out 8.be angry with(对……生气)→be annoyed with 9.be busy with(忙于……)→be occupied with 10.be very happy(很高兴)→be wild with joy 11.be+adj. (important/useful/beneficial/helpful/valuable) →be of+n. (importance/use/benefit/help/value) 12.be satisfied with(对……感到满意)→express one's satisfaction with

　　13.be interested in(对……感兴趣)→show interest in;be fascinated by;be crazy about;...appeal to sb.

　　 典句引领 Hearing the exciting news, all of us were very happy. →Hearing the exciting news, all of us were wild with joy. 听到这个令人兴奋的消息,我们都欣喜若狂。  雕词琢句 (1)In the coming three years, 　    (我们的学校生活将非常具有挑战 性). (2024江西)  答案　 our school life will be challenging (2)事实上,遵守交通规则很重要。(2024江苏)   

　　    答案　As a matter of fact, obeying the traffic rules is vital/significant.

　　 副词类 1.finally(最后)→eventually 2.hardly(几乎不)→barely

　　3.however(然而)→nevertheless 4.hurriedly(匆忙地)→in a hurry 5.immediately(立刻)→without hesitation/delay;in a flash 6.nowadays(现在)→currently

　　7.so(因此)→consequently;therefore;thus 8.suddenly(突然)→all of a sudden 9.very(非常)→extremely  典句引领 Finally, we worked out the difficult problem which was very tough for them. →Eventually, we worked out the difficult problem which was extremely tough for them. 最终,我们解决了对他们来讲极其困难的问题。  雕词琢句 (1)　    (毫不犹豫), I decided to follow them and did have lots of fun that day. (2024浙江)  答案　 Without hesitation

　　(2)昨天雨下得很大。因此,我们取消了会议。   

　　    答案　 It rained heavily yesterday. Therefore, we called off the meeting.

　　 介词(短语)类 1.considering(考虑到)→in view of

　　2.during(在……期间)→in the course of

　　3.in fact(事实上)→as a matter of fact 4.in a word(总之)→to summarize;in conclusion; to sum up

　　 典句引领 Considering his age and conditions, he has done it very well. →In view of his age and conditions, he has done it very well. 考虑到他的年龄和条件,他做得已经相当不错了。  雕词琢句 (1)事实上,每个人都有自己的优点和缺点。   

　　    答案　 As a matter of fact, everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses.

　　(2)总之,为了提高普通话水平,你最好多加练习。(2024四川)   

　　    答案　 In conclusion, in order to improve your Mandarin, you had better prac tice more.

　　二、学以致用 1.单句美容

　　写出与画线部分意思相近的词或短语。 (1)Bored with the long lecture,I turned to an interesting novel.  

　　    (2)His composition was so good that all of us wanted to read it.  

　　    (3)In fact,that English song didn't attract the audience.    

　　(4)I believe that the advice he has offered to you will be helpful to your English study.    

　　(5)In my opinion,you should take part in some social activities to open your eyes.    

　　(6)In a word,if you use your spare time better,you will improve your spoken Eng- lish soon.    

　　 答案 (1)Fed up with;amusing/appealing (2)outstanding/excellent;were inclined to/tended to (3)Actually/As a matter of fact;appeal to/capture the attention of

　　(4)am convinced/hold a firm belief;beneficial/of help (5)From my point of view/As far as I'm concerned;participate in;broaden your horizons

　　(6)To summarize/In conclusion/To sum up;provided;make full use of/make the most of;promote

　　2.话题写作 [本期话题]　文化节日 [写作要求]　至少使用三处高级词汇。 根据下面的信息提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 1.中秋节是中国的传统节日之一,非常受欢迎; 2.无论工作多忙,人们都尽量回家庆祝; 3.家人在一块儿赏月、吃月饼,玩得很高兴; 4.人们还有旅游、拜访亲友等其他活动。    

　　 答案 One possible version: Being one of the traditional Chinese festivals in China, the Mid-Autumn Festival has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually,no matter how busy people are with their work,they still do everything in their power to go home for the celebration. When enjoying the full moon as well as eating moon cakes to- gether, people are wild with joy. In addition, they have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting relatives or friends.In conclusion, the Mid-Autumn Festival is of great importance for Chinese people.

　　三、美文赏读 请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。 As Madame Curie put it,“I never see what has been done;I only see what re- mains to be done.” 注意: 1.无须写标题; 2.除诗歌外,文体不限; 3.内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例; 4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; 5.词数100左

　　 答案 One possible version: ①In the course of my years of school life,what strikes me most is that I've learned I should look at what I need to do in future,rather than be lost in what I've done before. When I was luckily admitted into this key senior high school three years ago with good grades,I ②was wild with joy,thinking that the good grades might guarantee me enough time for relaxation. ③Therefore,I found myself hanging around with some other students rather than devoting myself to my studies.It didn't take long before I realized that I fell behind sharply in my studies,sometimes even with my homework unfinished.Fully④ aware of the fact that I still had a long way to go before I relaxed,I began to catch up. We ⑤have a tendency to be content with what we've achieved,forgetting all about our road ahead,which may actually put us at a disadvantage.Only when we ⑥keep in mind what remains for us to do can we make continuous progress. 本文①—⑥充分、灵活地使用了高级词汇或短语,提升了语言表达层次,展示 了作者高超的语言运用能力,值得大家揣摩和学习。 【写作点评】