2024届高考英语二轮复习攻关篇课件：题型6 书面表达6.2.1（新课标全国通用）
专题一 生态环保 人类与自然的和谐发展是当今的热门话题之一。高考英语书面表达主要涉及对自然生态的保护、节约能源、防治污染以及绿色生活等话题。写作类型以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。 【典例示范】(2024江苏卷) 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解,以“Actions Speak Louder than Words”为题,用英语写一篇作文。 参考词汇:banner(横幅) stump(树桩) 你的作文应包括以下内容: 1.简要描述两幅图的内容; 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解; 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意: 1.可参照图片适当发挥; 2.作文词数150左右; 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words 【审题谋篇】 这是一篇看图写作题,要求考生通过观察和分析单幅或一组画,把图画内容转化成文字信息。写作要素归纳如下: 第一段:描述图画:描述两幅图的内容 第二段:揭示画旨:概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解 第三段:发表启示:举例说明图画给你的启示 【范文展示】 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture 2 shows a couple happily planting trees. The message conveyed here is clear:“Actions speak louder than words.” Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it?The answer is definitely the latter.Immediate actions should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the environment. Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need.We should strictly and voluntarily follow traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. 【亮点词汇】 in vain 徒劳的(地);suffer severe damage 遭受严重损害;take practical measures/action to do sth.采取实际行动做某事;the latter 后者;cut down trees 砍伐树木;better the environment 美化环境;meaningful 富有意义的;voluntarily 自愿地;rather than 而不是;complain about抱怨;make a difference 使产生不同 【写作技巧】 图画作文通常分为两段或三段:第一段描述图画内容;第二段揭示图画喻义;第三段表达受到的启示。 A B A 假设你是星光中学的李华,因越来越多的汽车导致环境污染做一个演讲。请根据以下提示,就Let’s Ride Bicycles这一话题,用英语写一篇演讲稿。 注意:①无须写标题; ②除诗歌外,文体不限; ③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称; ④词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。 Good morning,everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”. A B 参考范文: Good morning,everyone, I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.As is known to us,air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars.Therefore,it’s high time we chose another better means of transport,which is cycling. A B There are many good reasons to ride bicycles.First of all,compared to cars,bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain,and you don’t have all the added costs of fuel,and parking.What’s more,bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars,because they hardly make noises and exhaust.Cycling has become a new trend around the world,a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life.Last but not least,cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer.By riding bicycles,you can cut down your risk of heart attacks,high blood pressure and other illnesses.So I think,riding bicycles actually has great effects on us.Let’s ride bicycles from today on! Thank you for listening! A B B (2024天津和平区二模) 假设你是李津,为响应国家厉行节约的号召,请你以“为资源、为环保,厉行节约”为主题,向某英语报社编辑写一封信,表达你对此主题的看法,提出你的建议。 内容主要包括: 1.节约与资源的关系——节省资源造福子孙等; 2.节约与环保的关系——减少浪费改善环境等; 3.举例说明中学生该如何厉行节约; 4.倡导社会保持节约的优良传统。 注意: 1.词数不少于100; 2.开头和结尾已经写出,不计入总词数; 3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 A B Dear Editor, I’m writing to share my opinions about trying to save both for natural resources and the environment. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Jin A B 参考范文: Dear Editor, I’m writing to share my opinions about trying to save both for natural resources and the environment. Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day,so we should save some for our offspring.Meanwhile,saving can help us avoid producing waste,which will make our homeland more beautiful.As students,we should make contributions to saving resources and protecting our environment.For example,we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books.In this way,more trees would be saved.What’s more,we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame,so we call for everybody’s action to do what we can to make our beautiful life last forever. A B Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Jin
