gre argument146提纲分析汇总
前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
题目题材：教育
gre argument 146题目：
The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.
The librarians in our towns school system have reported that the number of trips that our students make to their school library on a voluntary basis has decreased significantly in recent years. For example, the average seventh-grade student visited the school library five times last year, but four of those visits were part of required classroom activities. This shows that our students are reading less than in the past. To address this problem, our town needs to improve the atmosphere of the libraries so that they will be comfortable places in which to work. If students view the libraries as uncomfortable, then they are unlikely to want to spend much time there.
提纲：
The statistic result of seventh-grade students might not be representative of all our students.
The author fails to illustrate that the situation last year was not an aberration and would likely to continue.
The fact that the number of students trips to library decreased does not necessarily indicate that students do not make enough reading.
The author simply assumes that our students make fewer trips to library because they feel the libraries uncomfortable.
The author hastily assumes that the proposed improvements on the libraries atmosphere would suffice to attract students to make more trips to libraries.
Other possible solutions could also be used to ensure students do more reading.
注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
前段时间为gre考生汇总了gre issue写作提纲思路和分析，希望对考生在攻破gre issue写作上有所帮助。接下来的几天我们将为gre考生整理gre argument部分的提纲内容。希望通过我们的整理和汇总，让gre考生真正能掌握gre写作的精髓。
题目题材：教育
gre argument 146题目：
The following appeared in the editorial section of a local newspaper.
The librarians in our towns school system have reported that the number of trips that our students make to their school library on a voluntary basis has decreased significantly in recent years. For example, the average seventh-grade student visited the school library five times last year, but four of those visits were part of required classroom activities. This shows that our students are reading less than in the past. To address this problem, our town needs to improve the atmosphere of the libraries so that they will be comfortable places in which to work. If students view the libraries as uncomfortable, then they are unlikely to want to spend much time there.
提纲：
The statistic result of seventh-grade students might not be representative of all our students.
The author fails to illustrate that the situation last year was not an aberration and would likely to continue.
The fact that the number of students trips to library decreased does not necessarily indicate that students do not make enough reading.
The author simply assumes that our students make fewer trips to library because they feel the libraries uncomfortable.
The author hastily assumes that the proposed improvements on the libraries atmosphere would suffice to attract students to make more trips to libraries.
Other possible solutions could also be used to ensure students do more reading.
注：题目中括号里的数字表明这句话体现的是提纲中第几号缺陷。
无论是gre issue还是gre argument，考生都应该养成写提纲的习惯。这种提纲式的gre写作练习可以帮助考生锻炼写作的逻辑性，而gre写作高分最重要的得分依据就是作文的逻辑性要强。
