GRE写作提纲举例指导（30）
30The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
30 尽管科技为生活带来很多便利，但目的不仅仅是提高效率和有更多娱乐时间
1、承认科技发展带来的便利和高效
telephone, Internet, improve th e efficiency in communication
automobile, train, plane fast transportation
household electronics microwave oven; electronic cooker; washing machine
2、科技发展提高效率的同时娱乐时间并没有增加
be expected to have high er production; increased workload; employee complain
3、科技发展有许多目的，不仅限于提高效率和带来娱乐时间
medical technology earlier detect of disease; the once fatal diseas e curable; reduce suffering for patiens; information technology facilitate global communication, info rmation sharing; civil engineering construction of building, bridge, road higher quality
30.技术进步和闲暇
一、技术应该带来效率，但确实越来越忙，不过技术进步的 purpose is far more than leisure
二、技术应该带来效率 It is true that technological advancement have made life faster and easier--that is, more efficient.
1.Watt使生产有效率，怀特兄弟使交通便利，贝尔使沟通效率，
2. ENIAC 使life style 改变，document 和calculate 更效率，Internet 通讯快捷MSN，使搜索信息效率google,yahoomore informed society can make quicker responses to ...
三、但确实越来越忙
1.Empirical evidence, Busy 这个词很 popular
2.像instant foods, communication tool, faster transportation 都使生活更加繁忙
3.技术进步的 addition time 不是为了闲暇，而是为工作。
4.使竞争更加激烈，增加了工作时间，又不断推动技术的进步，红舞鞋
四、purpose远大于带来闲暇
1.医学进步，计量经济学，engineering 进步structural integrity
2.是为了有更好的生活，帮助弱势群体
2.甚至，就仅仅人类的本性要去追求技术进步
30TThe primary goal of technologica l advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
技术进步的最主要的目标就是提高人们的效率，使得每个人都有更多的闲暇时间
① First of all, as we have witnessed, achievement in technology has immensely improved peoples efficiency, such as plane, assembly-line mass prod uction, robots. Computer, etc.
② The suggestion that technologys chief goal should be to facilitate leisure is simply wrongheaded. There are far more vital concerns that technology can and should address. 如：overcome treats, health, emotion
③ 最主要目标绝不是增加空闲时间。As a matter of fact, increasing efficiency is merely a byproduct of the advance of technology. Convenience long life/longevity
30The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
30 尽管科技为生活带来很多便利，但目的不仅仅是提高效率和有更多娱乐时间
1、承认科技发展带来的便利和高效
telephone, Internet, improve th e efficiency in communication
automobile, train, plane fast transportation
household electronics microwave oven; electronic cooker; washing machine
2、科技发展提高效率的同时娱乐时间并没有增加
be expected to have high er production; increased workload; employee complain
3、科技发展有许多目的，不仅限于提高效率和带来娱乐时间
medical technology earlier detect of disease; the once fatal diseas e curable; reduce suffering for patiens; information technology facilitate global communication, info rmation sharing; civil engineering construction of building, bridge, road higher quality
30.技术进步和闲暇
一、技术应该带来效率，但确实越来越忙，不过技术进步的 purpose is far more than leisure
二、技术应该带来效率 It is true that technological advancement have made life faster and easier--that is, more efficient.
1.Watt使生产有效率，怀特兄弟使交通便利，贝尔使沟通效率，
2. ENIAC 使life style 改变，document 和calculate 更效率，Internet 通讯快捷MSN，使搜索信息效率google,yahoomore informed society can make quicker responses to ...
三、但确实越来越忙
1.Empirical evidence, Busy 这个词很 popular
2.像instant foods, communication tool, faster transportation 都使生活更加繁忙
3.技术进步的 addition time 不是为了闲暇，而是为工作。
4.使竞争更加激烈，增加了工作时间，又不断推动技术的进步，红舞鞋
四、purpose远大于带来闲暇
1.医学进步，计量经济学，engineering 进步structural integrity
2.是为了有更好的生活，帮助弱势群体
2.甚至，就仅仅人类的本性要去追求技术进步
30TThe primary goal of technologica l advancement should be to increase peoples efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time.
技术进步的最主要的目标就是提高人们的效率，使得每个人都有更多的闲暇时间
① First of all, as we have witnessed, achievement in technology has immensely improved peoples efficiency, such as plane, assembly-line mass prod uction, robots. Computer, etc.
② The suggestion that technologys chief goal should be to facilitate leisure is simply wrongheaded. There are far more vital concerns that technology can and should address. 如：overcome treats, health, emotion
③ 最主要目标绝不是增加空闲时间。As a matter of fact, increasing efficiency is merely a byproduct of the advance of technology. Convenience long life/longevity
